Soul of the Phantom

The Perfect Mistake Writers Note: I had this story in my mind for quite some time, but I did not know how to start it off. First I thought I ...

A Happy Ending A Short Story By: Isaac W. W. NOTE: Actually, this story I wrote quickly, I was really surprised.(Writing took about 2 hours, while editing took 30 minutes.) ...

First I must say... HALO! ...How with that behind us I must say it was okay, but it was not filled with tha much actually. If you add more to ...

The story also seemed rushed too me. I did not feel that sad when they died, I barely knew them as characters, so I really didn't care for them. Maybe ...

Wow, this is an old story. Oh did you dig this up lol? Thanks for your comments though. Also check out my other story, A Voyage to Power Its a ...

A Voyage to Power A Short Story By: Soul of the Phantom NOTE: It’s been awhile since I have last written; I personally do not like this story, but decided ...

Was pretty good. Though there was the whole 'block-o-text' fighting against you, so it was a chore to read through. Also paragraphs would be nice, seperate the writing a bit. ...

Good start so far. I am not the best example for grammer and spelling, but I see nothing here right now to address. Looking forward to more.

Eternal War A Short Story based on the Table-top game Warhammer 40,000 By: William I. Dragoner Writers Note: I am a huge fan of Warhammer 40,000, I read almost all ...

Echos of War A Short Story By: S.O.T.P. ‘You can't say civilization don't advance... in every war they kill you in a new way.’ -Will Rogers ‘War does not determine ...

There's a lot of spelling mistakes, even my untrained eye can see, let me see if I can help. Seems like you have trouble capitalizing your characters names, which confusion's ...

This story confused me a bit. First of all the story started a bit to slow for me. And did not really catch my attention. You droned on a bit ...

Thanks for the review Phorcys! I appreciate this review, since informs me of stuff I overloaded on :P. As we speak I am rewriting this chapter to better fit what ...

I liked it. But I wondering why no one notice that the guard(s) died. Most castles have more then two guard's protecting it. Also why did this character killed the ...

Thanks Poor Imp. I will make sure to ask you something sometime :P Also the first chapter in my story has been posted.